I'm the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文： Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
范文： The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期2个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动 2. 谈谈你们开展活动的收获。
Boys and girls ,
Today I'll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
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